DAISUKI NO YUKUE

The story is about a girl who sketches drawings for her class. The boys volleyball team at her school kindly allows her to draw them during games and practices. She admires this one boy on the team, he shows lots of effort and is very good; however, he is one of the shortest on the team which is his weak trait. There is another senpai on the team who admires our main girl, he is handsome and very good looking. The senpai tells her to stop looking at other people and only draw him. Who would she chose? Shorty or Senpai? I'll leave it like that for no spoilers

Although I thought the the art was nice, and the plot was a little more unique than other shoujo one-shots (cute), it still felt generic to me which is why I'm only rating it a 6/10.

I’m glad it was just a one-shot. The art was very pretty.

I heard many people complaining it was unoriginal and predictable... I went in with an open mind. All I can say, if you’ve ever touched shoujo manga, or even romances in general, you will know the ending and how it will lead up to it. The gimmick was revealed too early and too obviously. And it was a little rushed at the end.

To improve this manga I think senpai’s “words” should be moved to the start. And maybe the gimmick written on paper, without the boy commenting on it. Also, there should be more fluffiness and cuteness. Because the way it is right now, it’s just a story that’s neither cute nor deep.