Made by a woman!!!…which is not a bad thing, but you'll be reminded EVERY chapter of it. From overly “handsome” (or tried to be anyways) male characters to sparkles around characters to things women think guys like/think. The whole thing just SCREAMS out woman's fantasy.
Its like a story a teen older sister would tell to her little brother. It often dips too much into fantasy , with drawn out and illogical events, extreme unrealism, last second saves (how you get there, how did no one notice you, do you have teleport ability?). Its also protagonist the hero heavy.
The humor, predictable yet not predictable nature, and uncertainty (some may call it directionless) that parallels real life keep “Yona of the dawn” afloat. I recommend this to women, women who fantasize about men a lot, and to men who fantasize about…men.