Art's great, read a bunch of this author's works and they never disappoint in terms of art.

...The problem is everything else. The best way to tell a story is to tell a seamless story. Especially with modern stories, if a reader at any point asks themselves "How many hoops did this character have to jump through to arrive at this idiocy?", you've failed as an author and especially a writer.

If the adults actually acted like adults in this manga, everything would've been resolved by chapter 90ish. If it weren't for the fact that this author has been active for many years now, I'd presume they're a teenager fresh out of highschool(or the Japanese equivalent). The angst is just that prevalent in this series.

It tackles serious adult problems in the scope of a tween still dealing with hormone imbalances. Honestly I wouldn't mind it as much if the MC wasn't such a beta-male bitch while somehow developing a harem off the back of his crushing insecurities. The guy's such a massive tool that as a gamer nerd /I/ want to flush his face down a toilet.

The MC's a pussy, the two main heroines kinda just occupy a neutral ground: One's good at cooking, the other's not. One's mature and the other's immature. Both are completely devoted to this massive shit stain of a MC and spend the majority of their screen-time creaming their panties at the thought of him. I haven't seen worse differentiation of romance targets since I stopped reading Chinese Xianxia novels' where every female love interest is endowed with "tremendous titties and jade skin", and some how all of 'em are love struck cock-mongers or damsels in distress any time the narrative mentions them.