If I could summarise the review in a single short sentence it would be that this story is a trainwreck. It started slow and then couldn't decide how to develop.

There has to be some sort of universal criteria for calling things a shinigami. You just can't have fun, happy looking kids (the main characters) turn out to be DEATH GODS. Honestly, these characters are an embarrassment to every serious shinigami character out there and Deathnote fans would simply kill themselves if they were masochistic enough to read this.

When a group of shinigamis appear on the scene and say something along the lines of:
I am ---! And that person is ---!! And together we are ---!!!', you know you're reading the wrong Manga.

The means of plot development were some level of terrible below what should be legal to force people to read.
For example, by the second third of the story we had a very realistic and relevant scene where the characters went:

'I love you (cries)' - Character 1

'I love you too (cries)' - Character 2

'I don't love you, I love a dead guy (cries)' - Character 3

Followed by random psychiatric lines being thrown at the reader.

The art was hydrochloric acid straight to the eyes. Disproportionate, unrealistic and full of those awful, awful sparkles and completely unnecessary special effects. They fail to illustrate any sort of masculinity the male characters: I'm glad that I can tell that there WAS a male character.

To those masochistic readers out there (I know you're out there) reading this is gonna a be a painful treat for you. But, if you're a normal, sane reader then your mentally-exhausted buddy, Maz-Maz is here to warn you: read this and you'll wonder why you ever wanted to read Manga in the first place.