Tragedy stories are by nature hit or miss, but even in tragedy stories there is characters that you end up liking and characters that are actually definable or understandable.. in this, there is no such thing. There are zero likeable characters and the ones you think you might like you don't know what they're thinking- not because they are good at hiding it but because their character is inconsistent.

The lack of decent characters ties into my main problem with my story.. there is no reprieve. Stories fall into three categories, captivating, enjoyable or a hybrid of the two. Captivating stories are those that are either deep in a logical or emotional sense, you become invested in the story and I am guessing this is what this story went for but in order for a story to actually captivate someone there has to be some kind of deeper meaning or silver lining. I'm aware I may be jumping the gun with the review since those things may reveal themselves later in the story but I'm not going to subject myself to the mental drain that is this story just because it MAY end up being something more and frankly I doubt that it will. If the story fails to captivate you or you having found it enjoyable before you finish the third chapter, it's not worth it.

It's not funny, there is no intense fights, there is nothing remotely thought provoking about it, all it does is make you feel like dirty and not the good kind either. No matter how I look at it, anyone who likes this story has a few screws loose themselves. I only gave it a two because I like the art style a bit, but even then while the characters are expressive the expressions are kind of odd.